Ink Practice: Cargo and Astrid

Some inking practice. Trying to work on my contrast with just black and white. Don't think I did that good of a job. Any critiques would be really well received. I am going to color it, because I don't like how my eyes are constantly moving all over the place, because the massive amount of detail, there's no real focal point. And that pisses me off and aggravates me. But I wanted to put this up, incase there are people who woud enjoy inked worked. Though, I understand that Astrid's head is a little big, I've already encountered that and I was too far into the drawing to want to fix it. Disproportionately large heads is a flaw of mine that I am trying to fix.
© Predator belongs to Fox
thought these two characters belong to me.